Okay! Everybody or Somebody Lend a Helping Hand Please! I Would Apperciate It.?

Question by TIERRA B: Okay! Everybody or Somebody lend a helping hand please! I would apperciate it.?
Well I’m writing a arguementive essay agreeing that laws and penalties for being charged and convicted of pedophilia shoulr be re-evaluated by the U.S government. Well I have started my outline but I need some advice on how I should approach a paragraph about these supporting point in my essay.
A.1
Treatment centers and programs for pedophiles.
A.2
Re-evaluating the second and third degree sentence laws.
A.3
Effects of abuse on children.
A.4
Rehabilitation for abused children.

Please If you can help guide me in anyway I would be thankful. I’m not asking you to write my essay for me. All I need is som help. You can give me ideas or suggestion whatever works for you. My rough draft is due tues july 3, 2006, so wateva you can do before then I would sure apperciate your advice.

p.s the person who I feel help me the most will difintely be rewarded for the best answer. Again Please help me out a little.

Best answer:

Answer by fcas80
Do some research in the professional psychological journals.

Answer by sgdonovan79
Try this: for each point on your outline, take one sentence to address the issue, one sentence for background, one sentence for the pro side (in favor for), one piece of primary evidence to back it up, one sentence sentence explaining the con side (in opposition of), one piece of primary evidence in support of that, one sentence explaining which assertion best fits your thesis, and one transition sentence at the end.

If you need more room make the pro and con for each point its own paragraph.

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